essay revision/ improvement

My strategy to improving my next essay would be to organize it more, and try to have a more structured essay. I think prewriting would help out a lot, just by setting out all my ideas and examples ahead of time to see which ones would work toward my thesis. Also trying not to summarize that much, and just sticking to the prompt would make my essay better, and after talking to Dr. Preston I realize that most of my essay was based on summarizing.