Journal september 12

Finishing the essay I didn't feel like I did such a good job on it, and realize what I could done better to use the time given in a more useful way.  I know I had good ideas but I struggled putting them together into words, and constructing a good thought out sentence. It was challenging organizing my ideas and picking the right ones that would support my thesis. Once I realized how much time I spent trying to figure out what ideas to use and making my intro, I panicked and didn't even bother laying out my essay. For next time, I know that I should layout my ideas before hand, to get a better idea of what and how I should write out my essay.